you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Ahmed Eldawy, and I live in Luxor, Egypt. I am writing
this
letter to show you my dissatisfaction with what was mentioned in your article regarding the similarities between town centres in my country. Let me first inform you that I was delighted when I read that you found the Egyptian citizens friendly and generous because
this
will entice more tourists to visit our homeland.
Additionally
, I appreciate the thorough descriptions that were given about ancient monuments in my city.
However
, the notion that the city centres in Egypt have the same characteristics is totally inaccurate because each town in my country is remarked for its uniqueness.
For instance
, Luxor is renowned for its old temples,
while
Cairo is famous for its Islamic architecture.
Finally
, I would be happy to take you on a tour to discover new areas in my town to cover them in your new article in order to encourage more sightseers to visit our country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Faithfully, Ahmed Eldawy
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