Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

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is very valuable in all fields. Some
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think it is better
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scientists, businessmen and scholars
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majority of their
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with others, I believe there
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some
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that other
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should know because of their importance.
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who say
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information
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should be shared with everyone often argue that
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way everybody can
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about certain situations.
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can increase the trust
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science, businesses and academics among individuals in all
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methodology not only can cause a rise in trust, but
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it can prepare
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for
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certain problems the whole world can face in the future.
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, if scientists share as much
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as they know about the causes of
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climate change that will encourage
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to work as a team to prepare for possible negative outcomes.
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, it can increase the interest among the
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populations
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to find alternative solutions for
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issue. Despite the understandable reasons why
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believe all
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should be shared by these
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, I believe some
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should be kept
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a secret because of several reasons.
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, negative
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cause panic among
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individuals.
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,
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chaos can result
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strict
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to
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's mental health and their daily lives.
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, some
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can change the meaning of the
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and create disinformation to attract
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's attention
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them.
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, during the coronavirus pandemic, some news
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told plenty of fake news about the cause of
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virus and some countries blamed
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the
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without reason. In conclusion,
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some
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believe scientists, business
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and scholars should explain everything to
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society, I believe
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should know a certain proportion of
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information
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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