Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

Information
is very valuable in all fields. Some
people
think it is better
to
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scientists, businessmen and scholars
share
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to share
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majority of their
information
with others, I believe there
are
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some
information
that other
people
should know because of their importance.
People
who say
information
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should be shared with everyone often argue that
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this
way everybody can
informed
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be informed
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about certain situations.
This
can increase the trust
to
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the
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science, businesses and academics among individuals in all
populations
.
This
methodology not only can cause a rise in trust, but
also
it can prepare
people
for
the
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certain problems the whole world can face in the future.
For example
, if scientists share as much
information
as they know about the causes of
the
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climate change that will encourage
people
to work as a team to prepare for possible negative outcomes.
Also
, it can increase the interest among the
populations
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population
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to find alternative solutions for
this
issue. Despite the understandable reasons why
people
believe all
information
should be shared by these
people
, I believe some
information
should be kept
as
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a secret because of several reasons.
Firstly
, negative
information
cause panic among
the
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individuals.
However
,
this
chaos can result
with
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strict
damages
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damage
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to
people
's mental health and their daily lives.
Secondly
, some
people
can change the meaning of the
information
and create disinformation to attract
people
's attention
onto
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them.
For example
, during the coronavirus pandemic, some news
people
told plenty of fake news about the cause of
this
virus and some countries blamed
by
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the
populations
without reason. In conclusion,
while
some
people
believe scientists, business
people
and scholars should explain everything to
the
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society, I believe
populations
should know a certain proportion of
this
information
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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