You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday.When you got home,you realised you had left your wallet there.Write a letter to your boss.In your letter: Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need Explain how you will keep up-to-date while you're away Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
this
letter. I have
health
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problem.
Therefore
, I request you to give me leave from
work
from July 1 to July 30, 2023. I have to go back to my motherland and be treated for a month. At the same
time
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I have
headache
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and
high
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fever. In my suppose, health is important for everyone. Having said that, I may not be available at the
work place
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.
However
, it does not mean I am out of
work
. The present time is the most significant period of our
work
.
Therefore
, I decided to
work
at night times despite the busy schedules at my place.
In addition
, I will join on-call and connect with clients. As you know, I will be in touch with the team to know about the status and clear their doubts.
Furthermore
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I will run the show during the client meeting and
this
would help to cover the whole
work
update without any issues. I look forward to seeing your support during my vacation and I will ensure that
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will go live as per the commitment
give
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to them
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rest please leave at home.
Your
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faithfully Khursanoy Ne'matova
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • however
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