Some people believe that increasing tax on various industry will reduce pollution whereas others believe that they are better alternative ways.discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is widely argued that the rising of
tax
is the best solution for decreasing pollution, the others say that it is better to do other modifications. I believe Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
tax
does not solve this
issue and it should be better to consider other ways.
Some people agree that tax
is only the best remedy for declining pollution releasing
by Wrong verb form
released
industeries
. In doing so, they believe that the authorities of factories try to Correct your spelling
industries
emitt
Correct your spelling
emit
less
pollutants in order to pay less Change the quantifier
fewer
amount
of money as tax
. Nevertheless
, it is possible that,
some of Remove the comma
apply
owners
of these Add an article
the owners
industeries
efforts reach more income, Change noun form
industeries'
as
a result, they accept a huge Correct word choice
and as
amount
of tex
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text
as well as
a higher income. All in all, for tackling this
pitfull
we must find different methods.
Many regulations have Correct your spelling
pitfall
pitiful
rectify
the problem of air pollution and waste materials. Change the verb form
rectified
Instead
of tax
, Add an article
a tax
firstly
, governments and descision
makers must restrict the Correct your spelling
decision
expanding
of new Replace the word
expansion
industeries
. Correct your spelling
industries
Secondly
, factories must be forced for establishing wide green spaces. Thirdly
, Paying an enormous amount
of fine would be another solution for some of the owners of industrial places who break the law in terms of the
production and releasing greenhouse gases and toxic elements. Correct article usage
apply
Finaly
, the activities of these places must be restricted Correct your spelling
Finally
in
particular Change preposition
to
time
of Fix the agreement mistake
times
a
day Correct article usage
apply
such
as mornings, in addition
, in
the winter, because, Change preposition
to
in
these Change preposition
at
time
, weather conditions make Fix the agreement mistake
times
this
negative setback worse.
In conclusion, forcing industries for paying a great deal of tax
would not be helpful to decreasing amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
pollutant
, Fix the agreement mistake
pollutants
governers
must consider Replace the word
Governments
the
other solutions, Correct article usage
apply
for example
, constructing manmade forests, fine
and the restriction of Fix the agreement mistake
fines
enlargment
new factories.Correct your spelling
enlarging
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