Some people believe that increasing tax on various industry will reduce pollution whereas others believe that they are better alternative ways.discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is widely argued that the rising of
tax
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is the best solution for decreasing pollution, the others say that it is better to do other modifications. I believe
tax
does not solve
this
issue and it should be better to consider other ways. Some people agree that
tax
is only the best remedy for declining pollution
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by
industeries
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industries
. In doing so, they believe that the authorities of factories try to
emitt
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emit
less
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pollutants in order to pay less
amount
of money as
tax
.
Nevertheless
, it is possible that
,
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some of
owners
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of these
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efforts reach more income,
as
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a result, they accept a huge
amount
of
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as well as
a higher income. All in all, for tackling
this
pitfull
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pitfall
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we must find different methods. Many regulations have
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the problem of air pollution and waste materials.
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of
tax
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,
firstly
, governments and
descision
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decision
makers must restrict the
expanding
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of new
industeries
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industries
.
Secondly
, factories must be forced for establishing wide green spaces.
Thirdly
, Paying an enormous
amount
of fine would be another solution for some of the owners of industrial places who break the law in terms of
the
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production and releasing greenhouse gases and toxic elements.
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Finally
, the activities of these places must be restricted
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particular
time
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of
a
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day
such
as mornings,
in addition
,
in
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the winter, because,
in
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these
time
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, weather conditions make
this
negative setback worse. In conclusion, forcing industries for paying a great deal of
tax
would not be helpful to decreasing
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of
pollutant
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pollutants
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,
governers
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must consider
the
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other solutions,
for example
, constructing manmade forests,
fine
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fines
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and the restriction of
enlargment
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enlarging
new factories.
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