In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the ciuntryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion abiut this ?

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Nowadays

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the increasing population, the world is facing a scarcity of living space;

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new space could be developed in rural

areas

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to accommodate the need for homes. But some people believe that it is crucial to protect the countryside to retain farmland and peaceful area,

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I personally disagree with

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statement because I believe the demand for the new jeweller must be satisfied by using outskirt

land

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for economic growth and ruler development. There are many points that can be addressed why a new home should build outside of the city.

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with, for the economic worth of any nation, it requires accommodating the basic needs of people like living space, food and water. As urban

areas

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are growing by leaps and bounds, so new

land

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is required; if we make more facilities or dwell in the city

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the city

areas

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will become congested which they are already.

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in the countryside, we have more unoccupied

land

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which can be better used for dwellers, and to build a new house many employment needs will arise to handle houses and support needs like markets, shops and many more. In

this

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way, the ruler area will be grown which leads to economic growth.

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, Some people believe in not occupying outskirt

land

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because it helps us to retain our environment in the form of agriculture. if farms or forests will be turned into society

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it not only affects the agricultural need but

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affects other creatures like birds and animals to lose their shelter.

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, the house can be developed on unfertilised lands, so the farmland could remain used for agricultural purposes.

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, I still do not believe in

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view. In conclusion, To make economic growth and satisfy the residential needs of the world new house can be built in rural

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Although

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, to make survival it needs to maintain rural peace and farmland.

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