Nowadays, the most skilled professionals have been moving to
work
in developed
countries
from their underdeveloped
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,
it is clear that
a diverse range of motivations as wages, professional development,
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lie behind
this
issue,
thereCorrect word choice
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are some ways to tackle
this
problem which I discuss in
this
essay later on.
On the
one
hand, the main cause of brain drain is
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, since skilled individuals who
work
in health, science,
engineeringCorrect word choice
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desire to get better income.
For instance
,
oneChange preposition
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survey of final-year university science students in Macedonia, 91 % of all skilled students chose to move
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countries
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to earn
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money.
In addition
to
this
, professional development is another key factor for skilled migrants to go abroad, as they are able to get quality training courses and
also
expertise
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experiments with the help of modern technology, which only developed
countries
have.
Such
as the Indian doctors and nurses have
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to move
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countries
to get jobs with better training opportunities and medical experience which are not available in their own country.
On the other hand
, there are
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of ways to avoid
this
problem.
One
of them is
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creating better fringe benefits for skilled people in their
work placeCorrect your spelling
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and
also
improving facilities and resources, which are so necessary for their
work
quality.
Furthermore
, companies should organize diverse holidays for
itsCorrect pronoun usage
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employees and their family members.
As a result
, it might influence professionals’ accomplishments,
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processFix the agreement mistake
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. In
this
situation, they do not think
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away from their friends, relatives and mother lands in order to have enough attention
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their own
countries
.
In conclusion, no
one
can ignore that wages and
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to build
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careerFix the agreement mistake
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in developed
countries
are the main cause of
this
issue, but I believe, it might be better steps
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if poor
countries
create better fringe benefits and increase some facilities in companies,
whichCorrect word choice
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skilled people
work
.