People believe that they should keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued sometimes that citizens should reserve their earnings and be exempt from tax-paying

obligation

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While

I can understand the reason why

such

a claim is accepted by some people, I disagree with

this

proposal and I do believe that paying

taxes

is necessary and rewarding. On the one hand, I admit that it is understandable for individuals to propose keeping all their

money

without paying

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their states.

Firstly

, citizens ought to have the autonomy to manage their incomes as they earn them by themselves.

Secondly

, with exclusive and complete dominance in their s, individuals' motivation to work and make

money

would be greatly stimulated.

Thirdly

, citizens are under greater financial pressure and struggle to afford

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taxes

nowadays than before;

for example

, they need to spend more savings

due to

the bills of housing, education, traffic, and healthcare,

such

a large amount of

money

has already accounted for the majority of their expenditure.

Therefore

taxes

exert a heavier burden on their shoulders.

However

, it is unreasonable to abandon

taxes

levy

and

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would cause many detrimental effects on the development of a nation.

To begin

with, if people's tax-paying obligation is

canceled

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, government organs will

be

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lack

of

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funds to operate, and

thus

not only progress in the field of people's livelihood may be blocked but

also

the society may fall into chaos.

Secondly

, without taxation narrowing the financial gap between the rich and the poor, social inequity may be far more serious. It is foreseeable that wealthy ones would be wealthier and the needy would get poorer, which would trigger severe conflicts.

Last

but not least, compared to

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the government

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which allocates collected

taxes

properly and efficiently in the bigger picture for the sake of

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society as a whole, individuals spend all their incomes only

according to

their own will, which may lead to extreme waste of

money

and egoism. In conclusion, my view is that there are many reasons behind the preferences of cancelling taxation, but I would argue that it is detrimental and infeasible because of the severe consequences brought about.