The diagram below show information about carbon dioxide emissions for popular private jets

The diagram below show information about carbon dioxide emissions for popular private jets
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below show information about carbon dioxide emissions for popular private jets
The given table illustrates the number of CO2 pollution caused by luxury private jets based on their needed
fuel
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and airfare per
hour
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. By and large, the figure shows that aircraft using more fuels per
hour
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produce more carbon dioxide
emissions
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as well as
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higher flight
cost
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. The Gulfstream III is the type of jet which used the largest amount of
fuel
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per
hour
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and the least is Cessna CJ II. Looking into detail, it is evident that Gulfstream III is the only jet utilizes the most gallon
fuel
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per
hour
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accounting for 488 and it produces the highest number of CO2
emissions
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on the atmosphere standing at 10,078 with the most expensive airfare (6,750$), followed by Gulfstream 550 (378
fuel
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per
hour
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and 8,342 pounds of CO2) and Challenger 650 (280
gallon
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of
fuel
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, and 180 CO2 per
hour
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) with the same flight cost in turn.
In contrast
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, Cessna CJ II use the lowest amount of
fuel
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(136) with the lowest CO2
emissions
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(3,002 Pounds) and the cheapest airfare (2,700$).
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, Beechjet 400 consumes 182
fuel
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per
hour
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with 4,017 pounds of CO2 and
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lowest price (2,700$) compared to Learjet 60 using more than two hundred fuels per
hour
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with higher CO2
emissions
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(4,613) and higher cost (4,500$).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, fuel, hour, emissions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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