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Today more and more tourists are visiting place where conditions are difficult,such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.What are the benefit and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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It is often said that
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many
tourists
 are seeing
place
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 where situations are hard, namely the desert or icecap.we will consider both
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 of the discussion in
this
 essay. On the one hand,the benefit to visit unique
area
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 where it can be difficult for
tourists
,
while
 they actually want to know different
places
 between the life in desert and other normal
places
.Since
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 they like to compare hard
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 easy associated with life there.
For instance
,If
persons
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 live in Greenland,they
can not never choose
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 hard conditions for living.
Furthermore
,the condition can be a bit difficult in
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 of
places
,but it is
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 and pleasant that they see everything.Because,they
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 to
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with
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 unique species or
environment
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environments
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such
 as
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 different species of wild animals.
However
,the
disadvantages
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 to visit
this
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places
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 can be more dangerous than calm.You know,the casualty rate is more between them throughout the journey.
In addition
,when
tourists
 go to visit difficult
places
,they even do not know
either
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 they will return back to home.
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Moreover
, visiting hard
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 can be critical for
tourists
 against temperature
condition
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conditions
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.
Thus
,if someone encountered with bad climate or area unreasonable situation throughout the tour,and can not endure,it will cause
weak
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 person or may kill. Including,it seems to me that
advantage
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 of seeing
hard
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 area
lead
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 to
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 worldwide,and
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 a memorize good or bad of
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 attractive trip,but there are problems throughout the tour that result in victim between them against wild animals or atmosphere conditions.
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