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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

#countries #people #right #vote
Voting is
the
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 direct activity for citizens to express their opinion. Younger people, the new generation of every society,
however
, are neglecting to use their rights. These might
rooted
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from
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in
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 the slump in interest and awareness in political situations. By the way,
government
 and parents still can encourage children to vote by implanting them about political news and voting regulations. First of all, youths nowadays don't seem to engage
with
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 political situations because of
the
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their
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 ignorance of the
governmental's
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government's
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 influence. As a teen, they received little to no effect from what the
government
 is doing; as
such
, they don't care
whoever
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who
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 will win the Prime Minister position. In Thailand,
for example
, before kids
coming
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 to an age legally to vote, they have little to no knowledge about the public's laws, governmental system, or any political history. Children perceive not only taking a poll
,
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 but
also
 every political activity as a kind of taboo; meaning it's an
adults'
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 duty, not theirs. Eventually, adolescents decide to be absent on polling day. Anyways,
this
 problem is still possible to solve by simply educating young people about the
government
 and political situation.
Government
 can regulate the mandatory curriculum to include more information about the public systems and current political circumstances.
Furthermore
, parents should implant their offspring by supporting more controversial conversations about
how's
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 going on in politics, maybe asking teens to express any perspectives.
As a result
, I consider youths would become more participative in governmental
situation
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situations
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; they will feel
as
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like
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 being a part of the society more. In conclusion, the loss
in
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of
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 interest and participation regarding politics in adolescents should be taken in
the
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apply
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society concern considerably. Parents and governmental personnel can encourage young people to
becoming
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 more participative in political situations by informing youths about the ongoing situation, stressing on what teens would be affected
from
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 authorities decision.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • democratic process
  • political instability
  • skewed representation
  • governance
  • erosion
  • civic education
  • alienation
  • policy-making
  • accessible
  • incentives
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