The charts illustrate the participants in the olympics by gender and by totals

The charts illustrate the participants in the olympics by gender and by totals
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The charts represent information on Male and Female genders who participated in the Olympics and
also
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provide data on the total
number
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of participants who took part from the
year
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1924 to the
year
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2014.
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, the male
contenders
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were more than the female
contenders
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and over the period there was substantial growth in enrollment for the Olympics. In the
year
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1924, Men contestants who enrolled for the competition were 3,000 and
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number
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moderately increased to the peak of almost 6,000 participants.
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, women competitors were approximately less than 500 between the period of 1924 to 1954. Later, in the
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1984, it nearly quadrupled and by the time of 2014, it just about participated equally to the male competitors short of 800 female
contenders
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.
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, over the years total
number
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of contestants enrolling
number
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never dropped and it consistently surge to more than 100,000
contenders
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by the end of the period.
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