The table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.

The table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.
The table illustrates changes that took place in the number of motor
vehicles
for every 1000 citizens in the period 1990-2000. As can be seen from the table, Brazil by far had the most
vehicles
while
Cambodia had the fewest.
In addition
, the Bahamas was the only country that witnessed a decrease in vehicle numbers. To commence with, in 1990, there were only 55
vehicles
per 1000 people in Brazil, which was almost 10 times fewer than that in Luxembourg (548) and New Zealand (531). In the next decade,
however
, the figure surged tremendously to 13,580 and remained the largest number on the table.
Similarly
, Romania
initially
possessed relatively few
vehicles
at 68, but after ten years, the number swole significantly and ended up at 8,012. Meanwhile,
although
Chile and Jordan
also
started out at around 50 to 68
vehicles
, they did not grow as much as Brazil and Romania and only had 88 and 157 respectively by 2000. Regarding the Bahamas, there were 235 motor
vehicles
in the country in 1990.
However
, they seemed to decrease over the next 10 years, leaving only 187 in 2000.
Nevertheless
, its figure was nowhere near Cambodia's, which had only 1 motor vehicle per 1000 dwellers in both throughout the 10-year time span.
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