The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people traveling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant

The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people traveling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant
The Pie charts provide information on different types of transportation used by individuals who are travelling to a university either for study or work between the two years (2004 and 2009) in the UK.
Overall
, the main method for commuting over the period was mostly by Car and Bus and in the later period Bicycles has
also
seen some hike. In the
year
2004, Commuting by Car was used by more than half of the public
however
, by the
year
2009 it depleted to the second most transported method and was overtaken by the Bus category which held almost half of the way of commuting.
Moreover
, Bus has seen moderate growth in commute when compared to the previous
year
.
Furthermore
, Bicycle was obtained by only 9% in the first given
year
nonetheless
, it nearly doubled in usage by the daily commuters in the
year
2009.
Lastly
, the least way of transportation used by the citizens were the Train and Walking, which only surge to 1% and 2% respectively in the
year
2009 when compared to the past
year
of 2004.
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