The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the total spending on mobile phones and technological-device services in residences over 9 years, spanning from 2001 to 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there were inverse trends comparing these two categories of expenditure during the period.
While
more and more people opted to spend money on personal phones, the percentage of residential phone assistance seemingly declined over the same time. As is represented, from 2001 to 2010, there was an upward trend in cell phone usage proportion, ranging from the lowest at over 200
dollars
to the highest point at more than half of 700
dollars
. The trend positively showed signs of continuous improvements.
However
, regarding phone services for civilians, the rate dramatically dropped over the period, from its peak at approximately 700
dollars
in 2001 to its minimum point of nearly 400
dollars
in 2010.
This
trend did not change from 2010 onwards
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