The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. ▪Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar gives information about the data of time in 1000s over five weeks that 3

computer

packages

were downloaded from the internet

such

as

ActiveX

, Java, Net. As an

overall

trend, the number of times

computer

packages

ActiveX

were downloaded from the internet

is

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increased,

also

remained constant for five years and

finally

ActiveX

always highest than either

computer

packages

on even weed,

while

that portion of

packages

Net was lowest than all weed. As the diagram's success

for

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in

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showing up to

we

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clearly the data of three

computer

packages

was downloaded, the

computer

packages

java increased steadily about 45s to 85s between

week

1 to

week

5.

While

the figure Net a sharp drop

about

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38 units to 23 units in

week

1 to

week

3, but the

last

2

week

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about 23s to 44s.

According to

the record for

Packages

ActiveX

dramatically increased from about 73 unit time to 110 unit of time from

week

1 to

week

3. The next

week

,

slow

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decreased

14

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by 14

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units and

at the end

5

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of 5

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weeks it rocketed by about 25s