The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. ▪Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar gives information about the data of time in 1000s over five weeks that 3
computer
packages
were downloaded from the internet such
as ActiveX
, Java, Net.
As an overall
trend, the number of times computer
packages
ActiveX
were downloaded from the internet is
increased, Unnecessary verb
apply
also
remained constant for five years and finally
ActiveX
always highest than either computer
packages
on even weed, while
that portion of packages
Net was lowest than all weed.
As the diagram's success for
showing up to Change preposition
in
we
clearly the data of three Correct pronoun usage
apply
computer
packages
was downloaded, the computer
packages
java increased steadily about 45s to 85s between week
1 to week
5. While
the figure Net a sharp drop about
38 units to 23 units in Change preposition
of about
week
1 to week
3, but the last
2 week
about 23s to 44s.
Fix the agreement mistake
weeks
According to
the record for Packages
ActiveX
dramatically increased from about 73 unit time to 110 unit of time from week
1 to week
3. The next week
, slow
decreased Change the adjective
slowly
14
units and Change preposition
by 14
at the end
5
weeks it rocketed by about 25sChange preposition
of 5
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