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It is often said “when in Rome, do as the Romans do” Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

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Nowadays,many
people
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 frequently say "When in Rome,do as the Romans do" and
this
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 quote got a big spread throughout the world.In
this
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 ,essay I would like to discuss why each person ought to adapt and accept the
culture
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 of the country he visits and think about whether it is possible or not to learn a lifestyle without knowing the
language
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.
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 with, I will give two reasons why we should follow the rules of the country we travel to.
Firstly
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,in a foreign ,territory you ought to act like
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the possessiner
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possessiner
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possesser
 of
territory
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the territory
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 do.
For instance
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,if someone came to your home and started trying to change your rules,you would be furious by his actions,
due to
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 the
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 that it is abrasive from your guest.
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,if you are willing to be the desired guest,you need to obey the laws of
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 that you are going to.In simple words,if you showed respectiveness to someone,they would double it to you. To start with, I will give two reasons why it is nearly impossible to learn a
culture
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 without adequate skills of
language
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.First of all,it would be very complicated to communicate with
people
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.Not only can not you entertain yourself,but
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 you can not understand the
culture
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 of the local
people
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.Because of the
fact
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 that
people
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 create
culture
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,so to engage in the lifestyle of local
people
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 you need to get in touch with them.
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,it
also
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 will be complex to read books and
newspaper
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 in
local
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language
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.
Consequently
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, you will not understand the
culture
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,given the
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 that books and writing all profoundly and significantly affect
culture
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. In conclusion,we need to appreciate the rules of the country we travel to,to be desired quest and just be polite
people
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.
In addition
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,you can not learn a
culture
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 without knowing the
language
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,
due to
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 the
fact
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 that
language
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 is 95 per cent of our history and
culture
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.
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