The given table illustrates the data about the independent films released in the UK and the republic of Ireland based on the category of movies in the year 2012.

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Overall

, the table represents the total number of different movies launched and the percentage of cash they collected by selling tickets in the UK and the Republic of Ireland in 2012.

Firstly

, it can be clearly observed that documentaries, dramas and comedies are the films that are highly released.

However

, biopics, actions, crimes and romantic movies are released the least.

Further

, it is very sad to see that documentary videos are released the most over the given period of time but earn very little as compared to comedy and horror pictures.

In addition

, it is really interesting to know that dramas are

also

featured a maximum number of time over that year but it collects less percentage of money than one biopic.

Similarly

, almost an equal number of horrors and thrillers are featured in 2012 but the tickets for horror shows were sold more than the thriller videotapes. And, there are some other eight pictures which earned more than romance, thriller and documentary.

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