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The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.

The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.
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The pie chart illustrates the distribution of
energy
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 usage in an Australian household, and the table presents the volume of
energy
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 used in each house per
year
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. The units are measured by kilowatt hours per
year
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.
Overall
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, Heating and cooling accounted for the highest proportion of
energy
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consumption
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. Water heating was the second highest ratio of electricity used. All other household devices occupied almost a third of the
overall
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consumption
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. in terms of the amount of
energy
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 used, the least value of
consumption
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 is 5,000
kWh
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 per
year
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while
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 the maximum usage is 16,000
kWh
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 per
year
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. In terms of Heating and cooling, it is occupied nearly two-fifths of the total percentage. Water heating followed as the second highest ratio of electricity used with approximately one quarter. Other appliances reported under a fifth. Freezing and lighting both contributed approximately 15%.
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, Stand by Light and Cooking presented only roughly one in ten.
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 the amount of
energy
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 used, the load of electricity used is increased based on the number of people inside each house as when the number of people increases, the
overall
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consumption
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 rosed. The minimum usage for one person is 5,000
kWh
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 per hour and the maximum amount is 16,000
kWh
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 for 6 persons or more.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, year, consumption, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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