The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The table below illustrates the
numbers
of students who studied in four different Use synonyms
schools
in 2000, 2005 and in 2009. Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, only specialist Linking Words
schools
stayed constant throughout these years. Other Use synonyms
schools
increased and declined in Use synonyms
numbers
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, almost all Linking Words
schools
showed Use synonyms
downtrend
. In detail, grammar Correct article usage
a downtrend
schools
in 2000 had the biggest proportion of pupils who attended Use synonyms
it
(24%). Correct pronoun usage
them
However
, Linking Words
after
Linking Words
this
year Linking Words
numbers
started to Use synonyms
fell
gradually and in 2009 they dipped to (12%). Wrong verb form
fall
Similarly
, with voluntary-controlled Linking Words
schools
in Use synonyms
2000
it showed Add a comma
,2000
also
the pick in Linking Words
numbers
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, the proportion of students who studied in these Linking Words
schools
dropped significantly and reached the lowest Use synonyms
Use synonyms
numbers
in 2009 20%.
Fix the agreement mistake
number
On the other hand
, not all Linking Words
schools
demonstrated Use synonyms
downward
trend. Community Correct article usage
a downward
schools
rose Use synonyms
noticeable
. In 2000 there Change the adjective
noticeably
were
only 12 Change the verb form
was
percent
of students who attended that. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, in 2009 there Linking Words
were
58 Change the verb form
was
percent
of pupils Change the spelling
per cent
who
studied there.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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