The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The table below illustrates the
numbers
of students who studied in four different schools
in 2000, 2005 and in 2009. Looking from an overall
perspective, only specialist schools
stayed constant throughout these years. Other schools
increased and declined in numbers
.
To begin
with, almost all schools
showed downtrend
. In detail, grammar Correct article usage
a downtrend
schools
in 2000 had the biggest proportion of pupils who attended it
(24%). Correct pronoun usage
them
However
, after
this
year numbers
started to fell
gradually and in 2009 they dipped to (12%). Wrong verb form
fall
Similarly
, with voluntary-controlled schools
in 2000
it showed Add a comma
,2000
also
the pick in numbers
. Conversely
, the proportion of students who studied in these schools
dropped significantly and reached the lowest numbers
in 2009 20%.
Fix the agreement mistake
number
On the other hand
, not all schools
demonstrated downward
trend. Community Correct article usage
a downward
schools
rose noticeable
. In 2000 there Change the adjective
noticeably
were
only 12 Change the verb form
was
percent
of students who attended that. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, in 2009 there were
58 Change the verb form
was
percent
of pupils Change the spelling
per cent
who
studied there.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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