The given bar graph shows the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features.
The given pie charts compare the significant energy sources in the USA between the years 1980 and 1990.
Overall
, it is clear that
oil and natural gas sources decreased, while
coal and nuclear power
increased from 1980 to 1990. By contrast
, it is interesting to note that hydroelectric power
remained at the same level over the same decade shown. Looking at the pie charts in more detail, oil
source of Correct article usage
the oil
USA
fell noticeably from 42% to 33%. Despite the fact that there was not any critical decrease, Correct article usage
the USA
however
, the proportion of natural gas witnessed 1
% drop from 1980 to 1990. The ratio for hydroelectric Correct article usage
a 1
power
was stable at 5% at
the same period shown. It could be Change preposition
in
explain
Wrong verb form
explained
the
fact that the sources of coal and nuclear Change preposition
by the
power
increased equally (5%). In particular
, the percentage of coal grew from 22% to 27%. The level of nuclear power
source raised two times from 5% to 10%.Submitted by mr.mehdiyevkamran on
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