The maps show an area ,before and after construction of some tourist comforts.
The maps show an area ,before and after
construction
of some tourist comforts.
The Correct article usage
the construction
island
before changes looks uninhabited,but now it is busiest
Change the article
the busiest
island
with individual houses,restaurant
,Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
pier
and Correct article usage
a pier
accommodation
. Fix the agreement mistake
accommodations
In
Change preposition
On
first
Add an article
the first
map
we can see nothing,just a number of trees and Add a comma
,map
beach
with Correct article usage
a beach
footpath
.
Correct article usage
a footpath
Second
presentation shows the contrast. After construction Change the article
The second
island
change
absolutely to Wrong verb form
changed
better
side. Residents do a lot of work to create a settlement with facilities.Workers built Add an article
the better
a better
a new buildings
taking into account with Correct the article-noun agreement
new buildings
a new building
location
of trees, wherein do not cut down trees. The Add an article
the location
island
have
15 empty accommodations, one pier,two sailboats,Change the verb form
has
restaurant
,Correct article usage
a restaurant
swimming
zone,and Correct article usage
a swimming
reception
. Between Correct article usage
a reception
houses
residents have special vehicle Add a comma
,houses
track
and Fix the agreement mistake
tracks
footpath
. Reception Fix the agreement mistake
footpaths
located
in Add a missing verb
is located
center
, Add an article
the center
from
near the sea north of the reception placed Change preposition
apply
restaurant
,around the restaurant
situated about 15 individuals houses with footpath
.
Fix the agreement mistake
footpaths
Overall
a
comparison of the two maps reveals a change from Remove the article
apply
desert
Add an article
a desert
island
to tourist
destination.There was a total redevelopment of the residential area.Correct article usage
a tourist
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