It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagreee with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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to learn the distinction between right and wrong at an early age.

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is important to help them learn

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difference. I partly agree with that idea. Because

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earlier. It is a requirement of

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. Apart from that, many people say that

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can learn faster than other people. Because

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their brains will be fresh at that time.

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hand, many

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something early that will be useful during their

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, plenty of parents try to carry out that idea.

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are very young yet.

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, learning something earlier for

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to get ready for tricky situations, and

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increases

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's mentality, and they can think like big people.

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, the reason

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age

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mind use so well is that they can learn everything fast and

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,

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's learning process leads to early in their

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of goals.

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, learning early has several advantages.

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,

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win from their ages.

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, they have a lot of time to achieve their goals and

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method can improve

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. When it comes to

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, it does not improve

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's knowledge. Because, it seems to me that,

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is a bad influence on

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, many parents punish their

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to learn very well.

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, they do not know that

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punishment

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has a big impact on improving

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is a bad method. Because

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they might be

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in the

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. In conclusion, learning early is essential for

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, if they learn without

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, and I strongly agree with that methodical idea. In short, it is very useful for

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and their parents.