It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagreee with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is necessary for

children

to learn the distinction between right and wrong at an early age.

Punishment

is important to help them learn

this

difference. I partly agree with that idea. Because

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children

should begin

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earlier. It is a requirement of

life

. Apart from that, many people say that

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children

can learn faster than other people. Because

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their brains will be fresh at that time.

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hand, many

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something early that will be useful during their

life

, and it brings some benefits to them in the

future

.

Therefore

, plenty of parents try to carry out that idea.

Although

, their

children

are very young yet.

In addition

, learning something earlier for

children

to get ready for tricky situations, and

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increases

children

's mentality, and they can think like big people.

Moreover

, the reason

children

of

this

age

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mind use so well is that they can learn everything fast and

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.

On the other hand

,

children

's learning process leads to early in their

future

of goals.

Besides

, learning early has several advantages.

Firstly

,

children

win from their ages.

Secondly

, they have a lot of time to achieve their goals and

also

this

method can improve

children

's

future

of

life

. When it comes to

punishment

, it does not improve

children

's knowledge. Because, it seems to me that,

punishment

is a bad influence on

children

's

mind

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.

For instance

, many parents punish their

children

to learn very well.

However

, they do not know that

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punishment

has a big impact on improving

children

's

mind

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. In my view,

this

is a bad method. Because

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they might be

coward

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in the

future

. In conclusion, learning early is essential for

children

's

life

, if they learn without

punishment

, and I strongly agree with that methodical idea. In short, it is very useful for

children

and their parents.