The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two-line charts demonstrate the differentiation of ownership of electrical tools with washing
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machines
refrigerator
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refrigerators
vacuum
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and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
amount
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the amount
time
consume using housework in households in one country, ranging from 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, whereas
the consuming time
in housework decreased across the indicated timespan, the quantity of ownership electrical wools increased.
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the number of ownerships of the refrigerator soared from about 1% to 100% until 1980, in the following years, it remained the
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, those of vacuum cleaner
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cleaners
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Conversely
, the number of washing machine
slightly increased to 70% in 1960, after that it did not show Fix the agreement mistake
machines
the
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At the end
of the given time
, the ownership of refrigerator
and vacuum cleaner escalated Correct article usage
the refrigerator
although
the consuming time
reduced from 50 hours to around 10 hours between 1920 and 2019.Submitted by eerkare on
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