The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two-line charts demonstrate the differentiation of ownership of electrical tools with washing
machine
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machines
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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,
vacuum
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and vacuum
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cleaner
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cleaners
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, and
amount
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the amount
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of
time
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consume using housework in households in one country, ranging from 1920 and 2019.
Overall
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,
whereas
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the consuming
time
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in housework decreased across the indicated timespan, the quantity of ownership electrical wools increased.
While
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the number of ownerships of the refrigerator soared from about 1% to 100% until 1980, in the following years, it remained
the
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apply
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unchanged at 100%.
Similarly
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, those of vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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rose from 30% to 100% till 2000 and it did not show any
changing
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change
show examples
.
Conversely
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, the number of washing
machine
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machines
show examples
slightly increased to 70% in 1960, after that it did not show
the
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a
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considerable
changing
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change
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.
At the end
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of the given
time
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, the ownership of
refrigerator
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the refrigerator
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and vacuum cleaner escalated
although
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the consuming
time
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reduced from 50 hours to around 10 hours between 1920 and 2019.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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