This diagram shows the process of wool production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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diagram illustrates the way in which fleece would be produced into woollen products.

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, the process consists of 4 main stages that begin with collecting, preparing,

carding

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and carding

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and end with the wool being manufactured into mass products or serving people's leisure. Sheep that meet

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moderate maturity would be sheared for fleece collecting, the main ingredients for the whole process. To prepare for the main stage, the fleece must be cleaned by dipping into

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for filth and dirt eliminated. After being dried, the fur is carded with some crevices on its surface, in order to be turned into turfs of wool.

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, for manufacturing waste minimization, byproducts like string enter a recycling process from

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point onwards. Taken out from the storage, the wool is formed into balls of yarn by spinning, which are available to serve people’s pastime - knitting.

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, those balls are manufactured into mass products or fashion garments including jackets or carpets.