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Some people think that animals should be kept in man-made cells. what are the disadvantages of keeping animals in Zoo ?

#people #animals #cells #zoo
"Keeping
animals
 in zoos should happen"is a belief of some people. Actually, to my mind, there are some disadvantages, that are more harmful to
animals
. Some all of the opinion, that visiting the
animals
 that are kept in the zoo is
an
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entertainment.
That is
 morally wrong, because of the lack of any protection for them. It is that keeping
animals
 in a cage can be endangered Worldwide because they do not allow life in their real habitat,
it
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which
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 led to habitat degradation.
On the other hand
,
survival
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the survival
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 of many species
animals
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of animals
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are
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 related to other
animals
, so if we want to keep them in zoos, we are a barrier to continuing their survival. Actually, we should question our no moral treatment.
Finally
, we are the culprit and we should be acceptable its consequences. In point of my view,
animals
 are not people's entertainment. Especially, it led compel them to live in cages in Zoos. Actually,
maintenance
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animals
 is morally wrong, protecting them in a protected place, because of maintaining survival, is correct.
For instance
, when some species are declared extent of providing a professional place to keep
it
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them
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 is necessary. Because it will be under
supervision
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the supervision
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 advance medical knowledge, but we should avoid using them to perform medical tests. I think
,
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this
 kind of keeping is a moral treatment. In conclusion,
however
, the zoo is
a
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an
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 entertainment place for everyone, but we can consider
animals
 right to enjoy seeing
animals
 in their wildlife without any restriction.
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