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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline, In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about my
bag
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 which was left on the flight from Toronto to London
last
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 week. I hope
this
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 letter finds you well. I am Ali and I was flown to London on 22 Feb and the flight number was 345 and my seat number was A8. I realized that I had forgotten my
bag
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, which was under my seat
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 when I arrived at the hotel. To explain with more details, it is a navy blue
bag
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 with a picture of a yellow dog
in
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on the front.
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, it contains some important documents
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 my Macbook and chargers. I hope you will be able to help me by bringing my
bag
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 to the lost and found department of the airport. I will manage to take it tomorrow morning. Needless to say, those papers have a crucial value for me and they are top secret.
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, it would be nice of you, if you could provide my
bag
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 with a safe place. Thanks for your help and support in advance. Yours faithfully Ali A

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Task Achievement
Include a more specific subject line to immediately inform the reader of the letter's purpose. Although the main topic is clear, a subject line helps to set the context straight away.
Task Achievement
Maintain a consistent formal tone throughout your letter. Phrases like 'I hope this letter finds you well' are appropriate, but ensure every part of your letter matches this level of formality for coherence.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively to organize your letter. Begin with an introduction, follow with a paragraph detailing the lost item, another explaining its value and concluding with your request. This structure is almost met but can be refined.
Coherence & Cohesion
Vary your sentence structures to demonstrate linguistic range. Use complex sentences and conditional forms where appropriate to convey your message more dynamically.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
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