More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think is a possible solution?

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In developing countries, much more
vehicles
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are being sold by citizens for the first time. The principal
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causes are pollution and
traffic
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congestion, and the most viable solution is to make more suitable
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system
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train
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and public
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. The primary issue developing countries face when their citizens start to buy
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is increased pollution.
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occurs
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of an overconsumption of petrol
vehicles
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and other kinds of
cars
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that have a negative impact on the environment. The greater number of
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on the road is
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responsible for a rise in
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jams.
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is because every citizen wants to save
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time to travel around the city using private
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, but it makes
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jams.
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, in Mongolia, most people in Ulaanbaatar city have private
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;
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, they spend many hours on the road. A solution to these
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is to make
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more public
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train
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trains
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like highspeed
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train
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.
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would solve the
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by
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suitable
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traffic
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system
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, and
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we can save many hours of travelling on the road.
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, in Japan, they have
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trains, which can travel ten times faster than common private
vehicles
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. In conclusion, buying and using
cars
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make many huge
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such
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as
traffic
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jam
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jams
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and air pollution, but if states will create suitable public
train
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system
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systems
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like highspeed
train
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system
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, all those
problems
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would be solved.
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