The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The two pie charts demonstrate the key reasons why
people
immigrate to and immigrate from the UK
in the year 2007 percentage-wise. Overall
, it is evident that the predominant factor that determined people
’s decisions is employment.
Regarding job-related reasons, three out of ten immigrants came to the UK
to have a definite job and the figure was similar to the emigrated ones, at 29%. Furthermore
, a noticeable percentage of people
, at
22%, left the Change preposition
apply
UK
to find a job, larger than immigrants’ 12% by 10%.
Another major reason for people
moving to the UK
was formal study, accounting for a quarter of the total immigration, whereas
only a minority of people
(4%) left the UK
for
this
reason. In addition
, the proportions of people
moving to join their family are nearly the same for immigration and emigration, at 15% and 13% respectively.
Last
but not least, just under one-third of the emigrants provide other reasons or did not give a reason. For immigration, this
category made up 17% of the total.Submitted by yoyoghurtxd on
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