This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the comparison of the number of recycled
paper
and cardboard
, glass
containers, aluminum
cans and plastic between 1982 and 2010.
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aluminium
Overall
, the total number of reused materials has grown. However
, not every type of matter had the same temp of growth. Aluminum
cans and plastics have shown a continuous rise but were less popular than other materials, Change the spelling
Aluminium
while
glass
vessels and paper
and cardboard
have taken the leading position regardless of fluctuations.
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Increased
Increase
tendency of Correct article usage
The increase
paper
& cardboard
and glass
was similar. Both experienced moderate
drop by 1990 and constituted approximately 65 per Correct article usage
a moderate
cent
and exactly 40 per cent
respectively. Nevertheless
, after gradual
fall, figures for recycled containers of Correct article usage
a gradual
glass
have grown to exactly 60% by the end of the period. Although
,
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apply
amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
paper
and cardboard
have declined after short growth in 1994, they maintained their lead and reached 70% in 2010.
Growth
trend of Correct article usage
The growth
aluminum
and plastics had Change the spelling
aluminium
the
similarities as well. Both showed an upward tendency, but the first one did it more rapidly. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
, by the end of the period
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,period
aluminum
reached more than 40 per Change the spelling
aluminium
cent
(around 45). At the same time, plastic remained the most unpopular material and had less than 10% (about 8 per cent
).Submitted by tsaryk2004 on
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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