the chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airport un New York City between 1995 and 2000

the chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airport un New York City between 1995 and 2000
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The given chart demonstrates the changes in the popularity of the 3 main airports located in New York from 1995 to 2000.
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, LaGuarde showed moderate growth without fluctuation and reached the highest result
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. At the same time, Newark raised gradually but entered the plateau by the end and was outraced by John F. Kennedy
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which experienced oscillations during the
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of estimation. In 1995 LaGuardia was visited by approximately 35 million people and took the leading position. The airport retained its lead almost every year (In 1997 there was an exception), and attracted around 75 000 000 people. The airport that was called in the name of Kennedy was rising unstable for the
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of 5 years. In 1995 figures were less than 30 mil. ,
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, non-static growth did not prevent reaching 45 million travellers. Newark was the most unpopular place between 1995 and 2000. Its rise was slow but relatively stable and after 1988 the place entered the plateau and
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of clients remained unchanged by the end of the
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.
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, the airport achieved almost 43 million people but did not outrace the competitors.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "plateau" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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