Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel, or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

The
Gap
Year
Gap
A
gap
year
is what many fresh school graduates resort to
instead
of directly joining a
university
the next September. Some believe
this
gap
year
is necessary to acquire experience, both in life and
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subject a
student
desires to study. I believe
this
depends on many situations,
for example
how the
student
plans to spend their
gap
year
. Indeed, a
student
needs time to recharge after a long, demanding senior
year
of
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studying and endless chains of tests.
However
,
this
need not be done by having an entire
year
of fun
traveling
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, which is what most
students
end up doing. Three months are more than enough if spent the right way. Many
students
believe that a whole
year
of rest might enable them to enter
university
in a relaxed state, with a clear mind. What they will not see coming is that, yes, their minds will be truly devoid of anything they studied the past
year
. It will be quite difficult for
students
to regain their academic motivation and fall back into the school routine.
Moreover
, the yearlong holiday will be almost impossible to let go of, understandably!
On the other hand
, if
instead
of sitting back and relaxing all
year
long, a
student
utilizes a
gap
year
,
then
I support
this
with all my being. Utilizing a
gap
year
looks like reading books about the field
one
is aiming to study
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, adopting healthy habits, getting a job that will help
in
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a CV, or even learning a new language. Basically,
establishing
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a strong foundation for
one
to flourish in
university
years, with the addition of anything that will appeal to companies, in a CV. Accomplishing things that could be the point of difference between two excellent workers in a particular field, whether that be an extra language, experience with computers, or even networking skills.
Consequently
,
one
will essentially have a head start on their fellow colleagues in
university
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. The journey
one
embarks on will likely be smoother than anticipated. Having some kind of knowledge on a subject before actually studying it, gives a
student
a boost of confidence and
self assurance
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. In conclusion, my support for a
gap
year
depends on how
this
gap
year
is spent, as it fully defines whether it was worthwhile or not. In the case of a
gap
year
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spent in a
student
’s
favor
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academically, it has my support.
However
, I am not all for a
year
of fun that can easily demotivate
students
.
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