A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
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letter to contribute to an article 'The
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that influenced me most' for the magazine, by sharing my experience with a very inspiring
book
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that has inspired me the most.
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, I would like to discuss here the
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"Rich ad poor dad" written by Robert Kiosaki, which basically focuses on financial literacy and how to create passive income for a lifetime, especially, by investing in real estate.
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book
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has made an impact on my perspective on investment and financial education, it helped me to understand the power of exponential growth and enhanced my knowledge about real estate. Ever since I read
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book
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, I am able to skillfully diversify my portfolio and reduced the chances of failure and started earning passive income at the same time.
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, I would
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highlight its key features,
this
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book
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has been written in a very understandable language and
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consists of numerous facts with graphs, which can help even a non-financial person to understand its methodology.
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, I believe it has the potential to influence and educate people at one time. Thank you in advance and please consider my experience and contribution
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your magazine. Yours Sincerely Vik
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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