The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table compares the world
population
distributions in the six regions from 1950 to 2050, over a period of 50 years. Overall
, it is clear that
while
the population
of Africa
is expected to increase, the proportion of people in Europe will decrease. It is also
can be seen that total
Correct article usage
the total
population
is predicted to grow significantly.
In detail, in 1950, the world population
was 2.5 billion, and this
number will considerably over the next 50 years and reach 9 billion in 2050.
In terms of main regions, Africa
is the only region that shows a
substantial growth, increasing from 9% to 2%, over twiceCorrect article usage
apply
? .
Change the punctuation
?
.
unlike
Capitalize word
Unlike
Africa
, Europe experience
a noticeable fall, decreasing from 22% to 7%, dropping nearly by Change the verb form
experiences
third
. The most Correct article usage
a third
crowed
region was Asia in 1950 Correct your spelling
crowded
by
56% of the worldwide Change preposition
with
population
, but this
percentage will show a very small rise over the period, finishing at 59% in 2050.
The population
of the other continents are not very noticeable. From a slight percentage contribution of 6% in 1950, the people of Africa
are predicted to have only 3% growth by 2050. Similar to Europe, the population
distribution of the
North America will constantly drop over the time frame, from 7% to 4%. The only continent Correct article usage
apply
that is
not expected to show a change is Oceana
, which Correct your spelling
Oceania
remaining
around 1% over the 50 years.Wrong verb form
remains
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