Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Dear Mr Manohar,

This

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is pertaining to the

news

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article that has been published in yesterday's Newspaper. I have been reading City's Newspaper for more than 3 years now for the authentic information it provides.

To begin

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with, I have been residing in

this

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place for more than 10 years and because of

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I know every nook and corner of it precisely. I read the

news

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of the city's lake being planned to be removed from its place and planned to construct a multi-storey building.

Firstly

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, the information is not true as I have been working in the field of construction and

hence

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I am aware of all sites to be built in town.

Secondly

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, I am in touch with all builders of the city.

Furthermore

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, it was decided

initially

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but

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the demand of ,residents it has been retained not to demolish and develop the site mentioned. I suggest you kindly write up an article pertaining to it in its

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explanation with appropriate rationale if why it will not be the case as mentioned in yesterday's

news

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. Doing so, will not only restore the faith of people towards your publications but

also

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a huge respect will be earned by your firm for bringing the truth to the community. Hoping to have

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regarding the same in tomorrow's paper. Sincerely, Akshay.

rashmi5232Sun Jul 16 2023

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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