International travel is becoming cheaper, and more and more countries open their door and with more and more tourists. Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

It is true that nowadays,

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has become more

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. Not only that, many countries

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promote their local tourism and open their door to welcome more

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, there are

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and drawbacks that could rise because of that. I believe that the

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do outweigh the drawbacks. On the positive side, I believe that the

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price for international

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trip

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would bring

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to those countries. The key objective to set a cheaper ticket for international

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, could increase the

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of

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and help to increase the state revenues. As an example, people could have a change of atmosphere and

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different

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at a

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price. At the same time, the local resident

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benefits

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because of the expanding jobs. As more and more

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come to their countries, there are

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more hotels, restaurants, and accommodations were constructed.

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, the increasing

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of tourists

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could help the economies of local residents and

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increased

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state revenues. On the negative side, the rising

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of tourists could cause the

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to

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tourism resources

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to overuse and overcrowding. As an example, for cultural destinations

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,

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, and archaeological

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, the management should make policies to prevent that and provide maintenance

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for redecorating, just in case something happens. By way of conclusion, having analyzed both of the merits and demerits, I believe that we gain more beneficial impacts rather than the negative consequence from the rising

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of tourists because of the

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price of international

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trip

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