Some people think it is better for one single legal system throughout the world. Others say countries should have their own law. Discuss both view and give your opinion .
In
this
era, the legal system
plays a vital role in our nation, because people obey rules only when it is drafted by an official. One
of the most controversial issues that is
happening is, whether to have one
law
throughout the world
or own law
for each country
. In this
essay, I am going to examine both views and end up with my opinion in conclusion.
On one
side of the argument, a few people guess that a single law
system
is better throughout the world
because it will give equal rights to humans and they can also
travel all around the world
without any restrictions. For instance
: with one
legal systemwithout fear, a person can travel around the world
, as there will be no issue with a visa. In regard to rights, there won't be anymore caste-based reservations in the education system
, which is followed by a few countries. This
helps to reduce the racism as well. Though, there are a few advantages to it, let's see another point to know about the disadvantages.
On the other view, they disagree to have a single law
throughout the world
. It creates an impact on the culture and tradition. Whereas
every country
has their own belief and custom, those will get affected when it is followed by a single term. For example
: Each country
has a different public holiday like Christmas, Diwali and Pongal etc. Based on that they will allocate law
regarding holidays, but when we combine it with a single system
it will affect their productivity and the other factors too.
To sum up
, In my opinion, each country
should hold their own law
, in spite of universal law
.This
will help to have a smoother country
operation.Submitted by sowmya madhavan on
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