the table below shows the number of mobile phones and personal computers per thousand people in six different countries in 2003.
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illustrate
the information regarding the Change the verb form
illustrates
number
of cell phones and personal computers
in 2003 in six different countries per thousand
people.The data is calibrated in
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thousand
.
Overall
,Iceland had maximum
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a maximum
the maximum
number
of cellphones
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cell phones
whereas
Malaysia
had minimum
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a minimum
the minimum
number
of personal computers
.
At a fleeting glance,Sn Mario had double number
of mobiles which was 100 per Correct article usage
the number
thousand
as compared to the
Chile.Correct article usage
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The
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Malaysia
had 50 per thousand
more cellphones whilst to France.The Iceland had maximum number
of mobile phones which was 900 per thousand
.In addition
,Zealand had greater
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a greater
number
of mobile phones in contrast
to Malaysia
by 300 per thousand
.
Probing ahead,San marino
had Change the capitalization
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maximum
proportion of personal Add an article
a maximum
the maximum
computers
which was 720 per thousand
as compared to other nations.Both the
Chile and Correct article usage
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Malaysia
had similar
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a similar
the similar
number
of personal computers
which was 100 per thousand
.Furthermore
,Iceland had 100 per thousand
more personal computers
in comparison to France.The
Zealand had 350 per Correct article usage
apply
thousand
personal computers
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