The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts demonstrate the comparison of money that was spent on different sectors by the regional authority in 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, for the several years number have not changed,
thus
, education , healthcare and pension retained their leading positions
while
culture ,transport and interest of borrowing remained the most unfunded areas.
According to
the data, the main fields did not show a rapid rise or drop and changes constituted less than 5 per cent for each of them. Education became less financed, losses were exactly 3 per cent by the end of the period. The same tendency experienced a defence, funding of
this
branch decreased in 2015 by 3% as well. Industries that were less influence in 2010 ,
on the contrary
, rose and got more support from the government.
Thus
, the welfare economy went up and by the end of the estimation period reached 13% in comparison with 8% that were in 2010.
Moreover
, the borrowing section doubled its sponsorship in 2015,
their
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figures grew up from 5% to 10% for 5 years.
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