Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible, while others believe that children should not start primary school until they are six or seven-years-old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
According to
me as children
go
toWrong verb form
going
the
school atCorrect article usage
apply
Add an article
a
age
like six or seven-
Correct your spelling
seven years old
years
-old have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
advantagesadvantages
Correct your spelling
advantages advantages
as well as
disadvantages too. My opinion is discussed below.
Firstly
, as a
Correct article usage
apply
children
go
to Wrong verb form
going
a
school Correct article usage
apply
as
young Change preposition
at
age
have
some benefits likes. When kids are 5 Correct subject-verb agreement
has
years
old as there
Correct your spelling
their
a
parents are working Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
then
it is good for the children
if they go to the institution. If the
Correct article usage
apply
people
will go to the institution very early than
they will spend less time with Correct your spelling
then
there
parents. As they will go to Correct your spelling
their
the
schooling Correct article usage
apply
then
Correct your spelling
the
word
load will be more on them. Correct your spelling
work
For example
, a child will go to the
schooling Correct article usage
apply
then
will learn new things and will meet new people
.
Secondly
, there are also
some disadvantage
Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
of
kids who go to Change preposition
for
Add an article
the institution
institution
at Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
early
Add an article
an early
age
they are. For example
, if the child will stay at the house then
he will meet less
Change the quantifier
fewer
people
. Thirdly
, if the people
go at 5 years
age
then
the teacher should give less homework. There should be less study for this
students. For the group Correct determiner usage
these
its
better to go after 6 or 7 Correct your spelling
it's
years
.
In conclusion, going the school have both sides advantage and disadvantage. As mentioned above the parsent
should Correct your spelling
parents
sent
there Change the verb form
send
be sent
the
Change the word
their
children
at
primary in the Change preposition
to
age
at
6 Change preposition
of
years
. In my opinion, as disuss
above Correct your spelling
discussed
go
primary after 6 Wrong verb form
going
years
have more benefits. So, its more
better if girls and boys go to Change the word
apply
the
schooling after six or Correct article usage
apply
seven-
Correct your spelling
seven years
years
age
.Change preposition
of age
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