Please help with the evaluation of the below essay. More and more people are choosing ready to eat food rather than cooking themselves. Do this development has more advantages than disadvantages?

In today's modern world, many people choose to buy meals in a restaurant than

cook

in the house. Both of these choices have advantages and disadvantages in taste, price, time, and nutrition.

This

essay will discuss these views and give a conclusion. On the one hand, buying ready-to-eat meals is better for both customers and owners.

To begin

with customers, they get more space to do other jobs because they don't spend an hour cooking.

Furthermore

,

this

option is a good choice for one who can not

cook

. People

also

can choose many kinds of bread that can be bought based on their nutrition, taste, countries, etc.

Moreover

, the cafe owner will hire many staff to

cook

and serve the cuisine in their cafe, so it will decrease the level of unemployment.

For instance

, students who graduate with a cooking major can find jobs easily because there is a lot of job vacancy in restaurants.

On the other hand

, there are many eateries that falsify their foodstuff content.

For example

, there is a bakery that sells vegan bread, but in ,fact they

cook

it using non-vegan ingredients. We, as customers

also

hard to make sure that the cuisine process is as clean as the government's standards. There is a lot of case of poisoning and allergies caused by restaurant food. So, buying ready-prepared cuisine is not always the best choice for humans. In conclusion, buying meals in an eating place is a good choice if we have no hours to

cook

, but always make sure to buy from certified eateries to avoid disease. I strongly believe that the public can search on the internet or ask friends for recommended restaurants before buying a portion of a meal from there.