You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain how you were helped • State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

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Dear sir, Hope you are doing well. My name is Lovepreet Kaur, a regular customer at the supermarket. The purpose of writing

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letter is to tell you about one of your great employees named Rahul. It was

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Saturday when I visited the supermarket for groceries. That day, I was with my family. My younger brother is very naughty. When he was on the escalator he fell down. Fortunately, he had minor injuries. But,

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, my parents got upset. After some time my mother realised that her purse was missing. She had her cards, license and some cash in that bag. We searched everywhere but were unable to find it. At that time, Rahul helped us. He went to the lost and found department with us and we got it back with everything inside it. Someone submitted it there. He

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, took care of my brother because he had some injuries. He offered a First Aid kit as well. That was

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a nice experience. Through

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letter, I would like to thank him and invite him for dinner at my home. Can you please convey

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If, he has any inquiries feel free to contact us at 4377890865. Hoping to see him soon Yours faithfully, Lovepreet

lovepreetkaur20102003Fri Apr 25 2025

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Consider providing a brief introduction about the specific issue before jumping into the situation, to set the context better.

coherence and cohesion

Try to make sure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea more clearly, to improve clarity.

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You used a polite and friendly tone in your letter, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.

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The details provided about the incident and the employee’s assistance are thorough and paint a vivid picture of the experience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain how you were helped • State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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