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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

#restaurant #manager
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Anne. I have just visited King restaurant
last
 Sunday located in district 1 which you are managing. I came there with my family to celebrate my mother’s birthday. I am writing
this
 letter to tell you about some problems with the foods which make me unsatisfied. It would be a great party with a perfect environment and nice views, but the meal already destroyed
this
 great party. I booked We ordered salmon salad, beef steak, and chicken soup for our meal. The problems were that salmon and beef were not fresh, even
they
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though they
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 had a different smell, and chicken soup was very salty, we could not
eat
Correct pronoun usage
iteat
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. We complained to the waiter and I asked him to cook new dishes
however
 he did not mind us. I and my family were very disappointed with the service of your restaurant. To develop your restaurant, you should retrain your staff and chef.
In addition
, I would like to get a discount voucher or refund for
this
 meal. I hope you will consider my complaint and reply to me soon. Yours sincerely, Anne.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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