You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Anne. I have just visited King restaurant

last

Sunday located in district 1 which you are managing. I came there with my family to celebrate my mother’s birthday. I am writing

this

letter to tell you about some problems with the foods which make me unsatisfied. It would be a great party with a perfect environment and nice views, but the meal already destroyed

this

great party. I booked We ordered salmon salad, beef steak, and chicken soup for our meal. The problems were that salmon and beef were not fresh, even

they

Correct word choice

though they

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had a different smell, and chicken soup was very salty, we could not

eat

Correct pronoun usage

iteat

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. We complained to the waiter and I asked him to cook new dishes

however

he did not mind us. I and my family were very disappointed with the service of your restaurant. To develop your restaurant, you should retrain your staff and chef.

In addition

, I would like to get a discount voucher or refund for

this

meal. I hope you will consider my complaint and reply to me soon. Yours sincerely, Anne.

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

186 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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