Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In the
ages
of developing medicine, Fix the agreement mistake
age
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
people
prefer to cure their diseases with new, different methods
of treatment
. Only small
number of Correct article usage
a small
people
go to their usual doctors
,though, I do believe there is nothing negative in seeking unconventional methods
of treating if people
want so
Today medicine is improving from day to day, doctors
and Correct word choice
and doctors
proffesors
try to find quicker and easier Correct your spelling
professors
way
of treating various diseases. Fix the agreement mistake
ways
Therefore
people
want to cure their health problems via these modern methods
. It is completely normal as sometimes usual doctors
cannot help and people
need to find another way to solve health problems. There are a lot of examples when untraditional treatment
helps people
to win disease
. Change preposition
against disease
For instance
, Medical Center in Uzbekistan, which
is famous in Central Asia Correct pronoun usage
apply
by
treating diseases, which Change preposition
for
doctors
could not treat. In 2017, doctors
from this
medical Centre helped a boy who could not speak by their own special methods
. So, sometimes alternative, and strange way treatment
can be very useful.
Moreover
, in some cases, usual doctors
do not have sufficient knowledge about a particular health problem. For example
, in Kazakhstan
quality of high education is extremely Add a comma
,Kazakhstan
law
, even in medical schools. Correct your spelling
low
Majority
of Correct article usage
The majority
people
are aware about
that and Change the preposition
of
therefore
give their preference to alternative medicines. However
, this
development might be incentive
for usual medics to be more competent in order to get Add an article
an incentive
people
's trust.
In conclusion, people
may decide for themselves whether to try alternative treatments or to be content with local doctors
. Personally , I feel that it is better to find medicine
that will suit them and help them, even if it is Add an article
a medicine
the medicine
unconventional
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an unconventional
treatment
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