Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
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majority
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the majority
people
prefer to cure their diseases with new, different Use synonyms
methods
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treatment
. Only Use synonyms
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number of Correct article usage
a small
people
go to their usual Use synonyms
doctors
,though, I do believe there is nothing negative in seeking unconventional Use synonyms
methods
of treating if Use synonyms
people
want so
Today medicine is improving from day to day, Use synonyms
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doctors
and Correct word choice
and doctors
proffesors
try to find quicker and easier Correct your spelling
professors
way
of treating various diseases. Fix the agreement mistake
ways
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people
want to cure their health problems via these modern Use synonyms
methods
. It is completely normal as sometimes usual Use synonyms
doctors
cannot help and Use synonyms
people
need to find another way to solve health problems. There are a lot of examples when untraditional Use synonyms
treatment
helps Use synonyms
people
to win Use synonyms
disease
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against disease
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for
doctors
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methods
. So, sometimes alternative, and strange way Use synonyms
treatment
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doctors
do not have sufficient knowledge about a particular health problem. Use synonyms
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The majority
people
are aware Use synonyms
about
that and Change the preposition
of
therefore
give their preference to alternative medicines. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
development might be Linking Words
incentive
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an incentive
people
's trust.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
people
may decide for themselves whether to try alternative treatments or to be content with local Use synonyms
doctors
. Personally , I feel that it is better to find Use synonyms
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that will suit them and help them, even if it is Add an article
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unconventional
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite