Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others say that there are more important environmental problems discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believed that the main environmental problem of our time is the
loss
of particular species of plants and animals
however
, others claim that there are more important environmental
problems
. we might indeed have some
problems
because of the
loss
of some special animals or plants,
for instance
, the only Persian tiger died out
last
year and it was very disappointing for Iranians. the main point is the next Generation cannot see
this
particular animal.
in contrast
and the most important than the
loss
of animals or plants, we have other
problems
too. we face global warming, lack of treated
water
or
water
source,
air
pollution, and deforestation. nowadays we can see waste in nature and close to rivers it can pollute the land and has many negative impacts on Marina species. refuse takes many years to Decay means that they remain four years,
air
pollution is another issue that should be concerned as an important problem
therefore
, there are many factors to cause these
problems
there are many vehicles in the urban and people use their private car to commute and for daily basis
furthermore
, plans are used every day and cause global warming and emit fuel, it is an obvious result the
air
is getting polluted every day. in conclusion, I believe that the
loss
of particular species, both flora and fauna is important and should do to prevent of
loss
them, but I do not agree that they are the most important than our current environmental problem which I mentioned them. if climate change temperatures get higher the
air
gets more polluted and the
water
source decreases there will be less
air
fresh, treated
water
, and neat nature, and the land will not be a place that we say is our home.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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