the diagrams below show the results of a survey from taiwan explaining how students waiting to study overseas, chose a university from 1998 to 2008
The two tables given Illustrate the reasons the male and females from Taiwan wanted to study overseas at a university in 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, in 1998 both of them men
and women
choose the ranking of university becoming the main reason to study abroad, while
in 2008 cost
of the tuition became the main consideration. Furthermore
, the modern teaching method was the least passion of those.
Turning to the detail, it is clear that
in 1998 100 % of males and females choose the ranking of a university as the first reason to study overseas followed by the cost
of tuition at 93 % in women
and the cost
of accommodation in men
at 92 %. In contrast
, the cost
of tuition become the main choice in 2008 women
and men
were just different by 2% with about 95 % and 97 % respectively.
On the other hand
, the modern teaching method was the least attention from men
and women
in two different years 8 % and 5 % in 1998 and changes to become 7 % and 2 % after 10 yearsSubmitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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