the diagrams below show the results of a survey from taiwan explaining how students waiting to study overseas, chose a university from 1998 to 2008
The two tables given Illustrate the reasons the male and females from Taiwan wanted to study overseas at a university in 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, in 1998 both of them Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
choose the ranking of university becoming the main reason to study abroad, Use synonyms
while
in 2008 Linking Words
cost
of the tuition became the main consideration. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the modern teaching method was the least passion of those.
Turning to the detail, Linking Words
it is clear that
in 1998 100 % of males and females choose the ranking of a university as the first reason to study overseas followed by the Linking Words
cost
of tuition at 93 % in Use synonyms
women
and the Use synonyms
cost
of accommodation in Use synonyms
men
at 92 %. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
cost
of tuition become the main choice in 2008 Use synonyms
women
and Use synonyms
men
were just different by 2% with about 95 % and 97 % respectively.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the modern teaching method was the least attention from Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
in two different years 8 % and 5 % in 1998 and changes to become 7 % and 2 % after 10 yearsUse synonyms
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