the diagrams below show the results of a survey from taiwan explaining how students waiting to study overseas, chose a university from 1998 to 2008

the diagrams below show the results of a survey from taiwan explaining how students waiting to study overseas, chose a university from 1998 to 2008
The two tables given Illustrate the reasons the male and females from Taiwan wanted to study overseas at a university in 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, in 1998 both of them
men
and
women
choose the ranking of university becoming the main reason to study abroad,
while
in 2008
cost
of the tuition became the main consideration.
Furthermore
, the modern teaching method was the least passion of those. Turning to the detail,
it is clear that
in 1998 100 % of males and females choose the ranking of a university as the first reason to study overseas followed by the
cost
of tuition at 93 % in
women
and the
cost
of accommodation in
men
at 92 %.
In contrast
, the
cost
of tuition become the main choice in 2008
women
and
men
were just different by 2% with about 95 % and 97 % respectively.
On the other hand
, the modern teaching method was the least attention from
men
and
women
in two different years 8 % and 5 % in 1998 and changes to become 7 % and 2 % after 10 years
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