The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart
represent
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information on
destinations
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the destinations
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of anthropology
graduates
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from a particular University after
undergraduate
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an undergraduate
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degree course.
Whereas
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table
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the table
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graph provides data on
income
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the income
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of anthropologists after working for 5 years.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the majority of
graduates
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have
a
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apply
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full-time work and the salaries of government sector half workers
is
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the highest
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the pie
chart
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more than
a
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apply
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half of
graduates
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have a full-time job, as was mentioned. The second biggest proportion
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to part-time work, which is exactly 15%. Next is unemployed
graduates
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that
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consider 12%
from
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all. Full-time postgrad study
graduates
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and
not known
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graduates
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,
however
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, have the same percentage which is equal to 8%. The least percentage , though, is part-time work+ postgrad study, considering only 5%. Turning to the table graph, there are three types of employment. 5% of freelance consultants receive $25,000-49,999 ,
while
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40% receive more than $100,000.
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, 50% get more than 100,000. Private companies,
on the other hand
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, give $25,000-49,999 for 10% of their workers. But the biggest percentage (35%) of workers there receive $50,000-74,999
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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