The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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destinations
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the destinations
graduates
from a particular University after Use synonyms
undergraduate
degree course. Correct article usage
an undergraduate
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graph provides data on Correct article usage
the table
income
of anthropologists after working for 5 years.
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the income
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it is clear that
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graduates
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a
full-time work and the salaries of government sector half workers Correct article usage
apply
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graduates
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to part-time work, which is exactly 15%. Next is unemployed Change the verb form
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graduates
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that
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not known
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not-known
graduates
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however
, have the same percentage which is equal to 8%. The least percentage , though, is part-time work+ postgrad study, considering only 5%.
Turning to the table graph, there are three types of employment. 5% of freelance consultants receive $25,000-49,999 , Linking Words
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40% receive more than $100,000. Linking Words
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on the other hand
, give $25,000-49,999 for 10% of their workers. But the biggest percentage (35%) of workers there receive $50,000-74,999Linking Words
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