The chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lectuer describing the information shown below.
The two charts given provide information about the worldwide distribution of sales and
share
prices for Coca-Cola from 1996 to 2001. The pie chart illustrates volume
of Coca-Cola users in five specific regions, Add an article
the volume
while
the line graph reveal
the Change the verb form
reveals
share
price
over the given period.
Overall
, it is explicit that North America hold a lion’s share
of unit
case, Add an article
the unit
while
Africa and Middle
East hold a tiny fraction. Correct article usage
the Middle
Also
, the figure for Coca-Cola
Change noun form
Coca-Cola's
share
price
grew substantially in the past 5 years.
Firstly
, in 2000, Coco-Cola is
sold around 17,1 billion cases of total sales. The largest consumer was North America, which accounted for 30,4% of total users. Following by Latin America, as the Unnecessary verb
apply
second ranked
leader, constitute a quarter Add a hyphen
second-ranked
for
the figure. Europe and Asia took up 20,5 and 16,4, respectively. Of the five regions, Africa and Change preposition
of
Middle
East have the lowest proportion of Coca-Cola’s unit case volume.
Since 1996, Correct article usage
the Middle
the
Coca-Cola’s division Correct article usage
apply
price
witnessed Fix the agreement mistake
prices
a
erratic pattern. Noticeably, the highest figures were recorded in mid-1998, at approximately 85$. After that peaked point, the figure of Change the article
an
share
price
dwindle to below 70$. Between mid-1998 and 2000, the price
considerably dropped and then
levelled off at around 60$.Submitted by anhthu3826
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