You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter, say: why you are going to this country what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive Write at least 150 words.

#country #year #place #agency #accommodation #information

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I am writing

this

letter to obtain information regarding the accommodation. As I am moving to the United States for my higher studies,

therefore

, I would request you to help me in

this

regard so that I can avoid the hassle of finding a good place. I want an apartment,neither too spacious nor too minute. I desire an optimum place with two rooms, attached bathrooms and Tv Lounge.

Moreover

, a kitchen should be there because I like to cook food by myself.

Finally

, I appeal to you to select some area that's away from the noise as I'll be studying most of the time and I prefer females in my neighbourhood as it would be more convenient for me to settle there comfortably. I have received a call and acceptance letter from a desired college and I will be moving to the US in two weeks. I hope you will manage everything before my arrival. Thank you in anticipation Yours faithfully, Kaswa.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

172 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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