You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter, say: why you are going to this country what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope
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letter finds you in good health. I am writing
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letter to obtain information regarding the accommodation. As I am moving to the United States for my higher studies,
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, I would request you to help me in
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regard so that I can avoid the hassle of finding a good place. I want an apartment,neither too spacious nor too minute. I desire an optimum place with two rooms, attached bathrooms and Tv Lounge.
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, a kitchen should be there because I like to cook food by myself.
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, I appeal to you to select some area that's away from the noise as I'll be studying most of the time and I prefer females in my neighbourhood as it would be more convenient for me to settle there comfortably. I have received a call and acceptance letter from a desired college and I will be moving to the US in two weeks. I hope you will manage everything before my arrival. Thank you in anticipation Yours faithfully, Kaswa.
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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