You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, Recently you bring into my room another student.
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, I was very pleased, because I thought a room-made will be a good opportunity for me to make new friends
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since I was alone.
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, the new boy, is quite mysterious. He always makes noise all the time, even in the evenings. He listens to music and sings loudly, talks with friends from his motherland, and stays up very late in the evenings. All these
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disturbed me from my studies. I start going to the library for studying but as I get back to our room, I couldn't find a place to relax. Please consider my needs, and make a relocation to a new room, him or me. I want to have room-made, with the same or similar needs as me. If he is studying in the same subject area as me it will be better. I am open to moving if there is a problem with moving John. Thanks in advance. Waiting for your proposal for a new arrangement. Mark Lord
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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