Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Say why a driving license is advantageous Recomend a drving school Give any extra guidance/tips
Dear Ahmed,
I am writing
this
letter to you,
since you have asked for Remove the comma
apply
an advice
about learning to drive. I am really glad to learn about your intention to learn to drive. In today's world, one cannot live without driving particularly in that part of the world where we are living. Remove the article
advice
a piece of advice
a bit of advice
Driving
license has many benefits Add an article
A driving
for example
, you can purchase your own car if you have a valid license, also
you can drive abroad while
you will be on vacation or on any
official tour. Correct determiner usage
an
Furthermore
, it will serve you as an identity in many official places.
In order to be successful in your driving test, you have to prepare well for the driving test. I will recommend you, one of the best driving schools whose success rate is 90%, however
, you have to still practice more as you just cannot rely only on their practice timings.
In addition
, my tips to you to be focus
and be attentive Wrong verb form
focused
while
driving on the road from both sides and also
be careful about the traffic coming from behind, you must have to look in the mirror and be vigilant about the traffic approaching from behind.
In the end, I wish you best
of luck and success and hope to see you driving soon.
Warm regards,Correct article usage
the best
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite